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Story of Mr. Fickle (not completed will finish by tonight)

Ol’ man fickle always seems to be,
a strong force behind a group of
office personnel of weak property
he showers them all with tough love.

His demeanor is that of world class drunk,
shattering hearts and spreading heartache.
Cutting and belittling, worse then a skunk,
he showers them all with vicious stakes.

Rude words spoken louder then
any raging mother who had lost a child!
He will cut you down in an instant when,
he enters the room after a night gone wild.

Balding at the top and little mustache,
short with stocky shoulders.
A belly over riding his jeans, we laugh
with a mindset of a child, an immovable boulder.

So easy to tick off, you can just drop a pen,
when through the shadows he flies
a raging lunatic ready to kill the men
who contradict Mr. Fickle and his lies!

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 18, 2008

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    This has a good base concept, but the flow and meter can be improved a bit within the verses.
    There is still time for editing
    Thank you for the entry and best of luck in the contest!