What was I thinking?
What were you thinking?
When you told me
How much you cared
About that boy inside
Remember what it would be
Forget what it is
Just go halfway to meet me
I'll be your constant
Your reminder how to fly
Rather than your normal life
Rather than your nine to five
Lets!
Pull these sheets
Over our heads
And just think on them
Recount our blessings
In the form of plastic stars
Taped on the cieling
We'll stay in each others' arms
Until they slip away
And become falling stars
What was I thinking?
What were you thinking?
When you told me
How much you cared
About that boy inside
Remember what it would be
Forget what it is
Just go halfway to meet me
I'll be your constant
Your reminder how to fly
Rather than your normal life
Rather than your nine to five
Author notes
for Ashley Cook
its litteral distance that is the issue here
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now this i really like
lots of maturity in the writing
lots of layers
What was I thinking?
What were you thinking?
When you told me
How much you cared
About that boy inside
Remember what it would be
Forget what it is
Just go halfway to meet me
I'll be your constant...
Lets! (really like that you exclaimed lets on its own here)
Pull these sheets
Over our heads
And just think on ghtme
though ghtme? whats that?
...plastic stars
Taped on the cieling (ceiling?)
We'll stay in each others' arms
Until they slip away
And become falling stars
really nice imagery, Dan, really!
I'll be your constant
Your reminder how to fly
Rather than your normal life
Rather than your nine to five
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Aww, Dan I love this song, its so beautiful, Thank you, I love this soo muuch, its amazing, It took my breath away reading it, and its just so fl awless and flowing, I love it!
<3<3<3
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wow alot of people lie and say oh you are my true love and so when i was reading this it kind of hurt me on the inside....don't get me wrong this is an awsome write it just brought back hated memories...
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this wasn't ment to bring bad memories unless its when someone moved away. because its distance that is the issue here.
please if you don't mind reread this and recomment knowing this bit of info.(you don't have to, i'm basically asking you to rethink this, with love not loss in mind)
you're the second one to think of this the wrong way, i'm gonna make an "author's note" of it
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Good write. I'm sorry you have a distance problem. True love will concer all.
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actually its a person where its not they won't love me also. It litterally distance. She loves me and I her, but she lives in Canada and I live in the US.
please if you don't mind reread this and recomment knowing this bit of info.(you don't have to, i'm basically asking you to rethink this, with love not loss in mind)
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