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Ivories

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Fingers tickle ivory cream
melodies born from magic dream,
octaves soar high like bells above
notes fit perfectly like a glove,
scattering far and wide below
fluid fingers know where to go,
finding a home upon each key
my sweet old piano and me.

















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  • Perception
    March 18, 2008

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    Oh wow... This one is penned brilliantly... Though the word 'glove' was a bit awkward, this was through and through a great write...

    thanks for entering
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    goooood luck