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Black Poison

Can words poison?
With out being said

Can thoughts damn us?
Stuck in our heads?

Can the pen slay us?
Is it really mightier than the sword?

Can paper trap us?
Lost between the lines?

Can a sentence trap us?
Lost in a world that never was?

Can words kill us?
They have already.

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  • tears o rain
    March 8

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    great wite and flow

    Wow this is an awesome write, I loved it.
    I really liked th lines

    Can the pen slay us?
    Is it really mightier than the sword?

    It's funny cause I was going to use something like this the other day. lol


    • Night Terrors
      March 8
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      ermmmm you know what's funny I don't remember writing this lol thanks for the comment though.

  • Thedamned77
    March 26, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you for entering my contest. However, I need to end the contest because there were only 3 entries. I'm so sorry. Thank you for entering and sharing your marvelous piece with me. Please enter my future contests. Keep writing!