When He was born in Bethlehem
I was there
When they laid Him in the Manger
I was there
When they had to flee into Egypt
I was there
When He came to Nazareth
I was there
When he was asking questions in the Temple
I was there
When He was betrayed by Judas
I was there
When they yelled Crucify Him Crucify Him
I was there
When they spat upon Him
I was there
When they put the stripes on his back
I was there
When They mocked Him with the Robe around His Shoulders
I was there
When they put the crown of thorns on His head
I was there
When they put the heavy Cross on His back
I was there
When they nailed Him to the Cross
I was there
When the first drop of Blood touched the earth
I was there
You see Jesus did all this for Me all the suffering
all the agony the pain the sarrow Jesus did all this to save me from my sins so that when He comes again in the Cloud of Glory
I will be there
Glory to the name of Jesus my Lord and Savior
Author notes
I write this not for Point's and Trophies but to the Honor and Glory of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ
Amen
This is what " ISAIAH 53 means to me the prophecy of the coming and the crucifiction of JESUS.
A contest entry
- Religion Anyone? by Luckintheshadows.
650 points, ended July 15, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WHAT DOES ISAIAH 53 MEAN TO YOU?TELL ME IN YOUR OWN POETIC WAY! by Sensuity.
450 points, ended September 5, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING!!!PREWRITES!!! EVERYTHING!!! by hershey101.
600 points, ended November 12, 80 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Amen! To that I love it I really love it Amazin I like it how you wrote about Jesus Nice of you for telling people about jesus that very smart thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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wonderful poem i have lost my touch with god but i hope that one day i can get close to him once again great job on the trophy's you really did a wonderful job and i think god would be proud of you i know i am good luck in all you do
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I would like to thank you for taking the time to view and enter my contest.
Contests here on Allpoetry are a lot of fun and I hope that everyone enjoys them.
I will soon be posting a contest for BRONZE only poems. I do hope you will consider entering.
If you are dreaming, you should be writing
For dreams are words we should share
Sharing makes us all stronger
So thank you for sharing your dreams and words with me
Judging:
Nicely written, I look forward to the day that "I was there as well".
Title: Not the most unique title yet it does fit well.
Content: Content was filled very well given your choice of poem.
Imagery: The imagery was good yet if adding just a little more description this poem would be very rich.
Grammar: There are some spelling errors you may want to change, just run it through spell check.
Flow: I think if you broke this up into a few stanza's with the ending of the stanza being "I was there" it was difficult to read and it threw off the flow. It is a nice poem honoring our Lord so I think I would want it very well polished.
A goal is a dream with a deadline.
-Napolean Hill-65
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I"m am very glad you didn't right this for points and trophies and that you wanted to show ppl Jesus throught this. that is a magnifiscent idea.
Again, thanks for entering
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Clever write, for He died so that we would be there, here now. Well done. Blessings.
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Thank you for entering.
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awsome
totally and truly amazingly awsome -
Ever so deserving of the award, as I read it I wondered if you had it in a contest because the I was there tugs at the heart strings for those that love Jesus. You know I loved it!
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This is beautiful. I enjoyed the read very much. I did have a typo on the contest page, and if an entry placed in another contest, it cannot be entered here. It is a great piece of poetry.
Sam
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Sorry
I wanted to thank you for the nice comment and to say I some how missed the part about having placed.
Good Luck with your contest hope you get many more entries.
God Bless.
ED.
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL POEM
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This was a beautiful depiction of the beauty and agony of the cross. I loved the repitition of ' I was there', It brought that piece to life . Thanks for entering my contest and good luck. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more of your work.
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Awesome
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Very very good. Your passion and devotion comes through bright and clear, and I must say, that any kind of writing should not be done for points and trophies.
Thank you for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,
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Amen!
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A nice write.With all that we know and live now, we were there, if we accept Him as our Saviour. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Amen! GLory to the Father and the Son! Your faith really shines in this wonderfully penned piece! THanks for sharing it! BLessings and best wishes,
Frogz~
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Wonderful
Love filled poem praising our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. To Him be the Glory. This is a wonderful poem. Keep up the good writing.
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Beautiful praise poem for our Savior. I loved how you used the phraise I was there ove ond over. It really set the tone of the poem. So much truth in it, and yes in all things even our poetry God must be glorified!
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