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Tonight marks eternity

To escape is not to die,
to die is not to end.

Ending is only beginning,
a beginning of us.

Eternal in the dark dance,
never ending in passion.

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Based on; http://www.glitter-graphics.com/graphics/518184%A0

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    Unique take from the prompt
    I love this style of poetry
    Thank you for your entry and good luck
    Julie


  • aboomer silver member
    March 18, 2008

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    I think you did a great job with that picture! I like your wording - simple, yet very effective.
    Well done!
    best wishes in the contest.