Just when I thought
All My dreams were a Lie
I held my feelings inside myself
Not realizing how it was hurting you
all the glitter
all the glam
Stay in line, don't make a sound
let them hear what they wanna hear
Introduction to misery
pain
The music blasts her ears
and she falls inside herself
Save me from the Nightmares
I've been afraid to long
Swallow the screams back into your ears.
Forget all the memories from all these years.
save your opinion for another day
Author notes
For a contest. First two lines of my most resent 8 poems and the last line of my 9th. actually turned out pretty cool
A contest entry
- Insane Tributes to Favorite Teachers... Build a tribute poem by stealing lines from your own poetry... by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A really excellent angst poem!!
YES! Amazing, isn't it? Your basic instincts in poetry combine no matter how you roll the dice.
I'm re-reading this poem and WOW, it is cool. 
It's like you meant it to be. 
On the first line... you want the word "thought."
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hehe thanks ^.^' all fixed now. thanks for noticing that. (and for the compliment.) amazing sometimes. like those subliminal messages. everything seems to fit
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