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Wings

Devotion's fluttering stance

upon the cathedral's ancient cliff

uttering chants of petition for divine reclamation,

feeling plumes of anointing

from the heavenly embrace,

obeying the voice of light

that whispers to jump and soar

beyond the precipice of rituals.

 

Faith flies towards clouds,

heart is caught upon zephyr elation's current,

until illusion evaporates and reality's gravity

sucks the spirit towards consequence's stony rocks.

 

Ears heard the immortal gust breath a flame

and thought it was a psalm from God,

but never packed a scripture's parachute

for knowing His promise

instead of a deceiver's seductive sentences.

 

Discovering harshly that not all urges

one thinks have eternal song

come from the same source,

without the sacred scriptures strings

to tether one to the truth,

it is so easy to leap off wisdom's ledge

by the words coming from hell's liturgical charade.

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  • warrior-eagle
    March 28, 2008
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    This was...
    this just
    left me speechless.

    Thanks for enterng.

    ..Simply Me♥


  • thepoetssoul
    March 18, 2008

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    Splendidly done on the prompt.
    The imagery is fantastic for sure
    You painted a masterful penning.
    Best of wishes to you.

    Tony

  • carole21
    March 18, 2008

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    interesting

    interesting write on the prompt . . liked "uttering chants of petition for divine reclamation" and "it is so easy to leap off wisdom's ledge" . . good luck in the contest . .

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    Oh I think this is a great take on the prompt you always do so well with these goodluck in the contest much love always