Overlapping ripples
Reflection in a mirror
of whom she was
Secluded thoughts
Expectations shattered
a dream
Author notes
Picture Prompt Pif
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Image semi-quickie 12-20 by Grey Mouser.
525 points, ended March 20, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by M a r l u x i a.
20000 points, ended June 2, 1070 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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THIS IS WOW!! YOU CAN SAY SO MUCH WITH ONLY A FEW WORDS!!! I LOVE IT!! THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL WRITE!! I LOVE THE PICTURE AND THE RIPPLES!! THATS AMAZING!! EXOTIC!! LOVE IT!!
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THIS WAS SUCH A COOL PICTURE PROMPT- AND MORE THAN WORTHY OF THE GOLD!
Yet, another fine piece, indeed, Julie! You told us all that we needed to know about SOLITUDE in just a few well chosen words! Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this with me - as always! I missed you today - and hope to see you on AP, tomorrow!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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WOW there is no other word for it, this is fantastic, afantastic take from the picture, great imagery. i love it. u know i´ve commented befre but i thought this deserved another
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contemplation at its reflective best!
this is so well worded. very insightful and refreshing take on the picture.Amazing word economy and simplicity as well. Good write.
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Again Cool
I am a big fan of using the least amount of words to create the maximum amount of imagery and emotion. I guess I am an Emily fan at heart. Great Write! ~Gar -
reptile lady
did is 1 of yr best ever
congrats on de gold
abe
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beautiful
grovy chick 80 maralisas angel
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Very beautiful emotional write, amazing imaagery, congratulations on the gold!
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Magnificent capturing of feeling and emotion. Great imagery that shimmers in the mind. Well done and thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser
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Wonderful
Marvelous take on the pic prompt.
Very poignant!
Well penned!
Wish you the best in the contest!
Much love
Many blessings
David
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Great take on the picture--a beautifully versed piece!
Best of luck in the contest!
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Lovely poem hun.... painted the prompt perfectly....good luck in the contest..
Rob
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wonderful take on the picture, amazing imagery, graet write x x
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A wonderful take on the prompt, beautifully penned. Good luck
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First off, I have to say that this is STUNNING! Amazing writing and imagery here. I love it.
Well done Julie
Love
Wayne Leon
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You'd think by now that I would stop being surprised when confronted with your talent!!! LOL. You go girl!! This is great!!!
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Very nice work here
Yes it is a very gentle poem yet it speaks in volume
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