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The pain

The pain of seeing you two,
Its so intense it unbelievable.

You dont even realise how it makes me feel,

I hate seeing you everyday.

The pain shoots through my heart like a red hot poker!

The remains of my heart are slowly shattered each time.

A love from one heart to another is fragile,

The day let you go, my heart shattered.

To see you moving on, rips a hole in the remains.

I shouldn't feel bitter because i let you go,

I cant help it though, every sight hurts.

I see people looking at you and all i want to do is hurt them.

YOU ARE MINE.

But your not are you.....................................

Your not mine anymore.

Were you ever truely mine?

It feels like you have forgotten me.

Have you?

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This is so true and the person who it is for will understand what i mean.

i need your comments on this piece please

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  • hopelessly-broken
    March 27, 2008
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    well i loved the way you expressed your feeling sin this peice, and how honest you truely were. im soryr things havnt gone better for you and this person. but never doubt yourself, and dont forget who you are!

    keep writting
    love always HB
    xoxoxoxoxo


  • Nobody Important
    March 26, 2008
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    to be honest reckon you could have put this better.
    it's not very poetic
    sorry to be harsh


    • satan666
      March 27, 2008
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      that was harsh and i was crying at the time. so im allowed lol


  • satan666
    March 19, 2008
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    sorry

    this poem wass not meant to be on twice