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Take Me Tonight

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Love me, touch me, and hold me tight

Warm sensations that feel just right

Passions swell under the moonlight

Take me tonight, take me tonight

~ * ~

I need you now, turn off the light

Juices flowing, a sweet delight

Ecstasy at a brand new height

Take me tonight, take me tonight

Author notes

Monotetra
The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines
in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes
the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated.
It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.

Stanza Structure:

Line 1: 8 syllables; A1
Line 2: 8 syllables; A2
Line 3: 8 syllables; A3
Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4


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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 23, 2008

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    Take you tonight ... alright

    Sexy, sensual, loving, hot and tasty this write has it all
    Lusciously penned baby

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    I love you, always
    ~Manda


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 21, 2008

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    I have seen this form floating around its pretty nice and you made it look even better with this sensual but sweet write. Well done Dear Good luck with it


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    wow that was soooo awesome! very sexy and sensual without being graphic. loved it!!!


    • Poetic-Theorem gold member
      March 19, 2008
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      Prince,
      Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I'm trying to improve on tasteful sensual writes. I do tend to get naughty at times

      Take care
      Much love
      hug*
      David


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 19, 2008

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    Whoa... passionate piece here.. written perfectly to the form... love sensual writes that are as tasteful as this... far more erotic in my opinion.

    Fab!!

    • Poetic-Theorem gold member
      March 19, 2008
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      Jackie,
      Thanks for the sweet comments.
      Writing tastefully sensual writes is something I am trying to improve on. I tend to get naughty I think the form the Kaz brought forth allowed me to write mor sensual. Let the reader's mind go from there

      Take care
      Much love
      David


  • dustookie2
    March 18, 2008
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