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Centaurs

Trotting about on desert’s sands
shooting flaming arrows with his hands,
into the dark and dreary air
he might start a fire up there.
Above the heavens
arrows will fly
centaurs half horse, half guy.
Shooting with passion from his heart
that’s defiantly the man part.
Surrounded in anger I must say
he’s taking a break today,
from this world of chaos
he want to show the world who is boss.
Rising up on his hind legs
for love this centaurs begs.
Passion

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Artwork by H.P. Kolb

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Nice title. A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Nice rhythm. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.