The sound of the water rapping on the river bed draws me in. I like the way it sounds. So peaceful and calm, yet dangerous and deadly. I wanna go in, just feel it surround me. I want the water to wash away my pain. Wash away the scars and the fresh cuts. The wind blows and I can feel it. I'm still alive. I step into the water and sink deep down. I open myself up and let the water rush in. I'm drowning. It's gone. The pain from your words, the pain from your hits, everything. It's gone. Just like you. It's gone. I'm dead now, I was lured in by the water rapping on the river bed.
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bravo
This is an excellent piece of prose! Exceptionally descriptive and very well done! bravo... bravo... bravo...
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