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dont read

The nights going on
And I'm going home
The miles between us
are getting longer
The closer i get to you

I've not been
the perfect one for you
I've treated you like crap
And now it's time to say...

I'm leaving down this road
And i'm not turning back
You can follow if you want
But bear in mind,
you'll only hurt yourself in the end...

I'll bring you down
without a thought
You know i won't mean it
But you don't deserve it

I hate myself a little more
Each time i turn around
to see me trip you in your steps
to see me hurt you
with such endless pain

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  • Walking Tall
    March 20, 2008

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    every time i fall. every time i stumble.
    i'll climb back up knowing you'll be there.
    waiting to kiss it better
    with hugs
    and love
    and i'll follow you to the ends of the earth
    to hell and back.
    i'll die for you
    i love you


  • ckwriter69
    March 19, 2008

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    Interesting write Beks. The title intriqued me, "Don't Read" I had to ask myself "Why not?" Sounds like you have a follower that you don't treat well. Keep sharing your poetry and thoughts. Don't let that pen dry up and keep writing.