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dedication

twelve weeks
vocal cords are
present, ideas here

often early; premature jump

ends all



Author notes

good luck isn't ultimate setting; Isaiah 65:11

comments don't have to be flat
without unnatural emoticons NOR the applause at all, please

A contest entry

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  • Metaphorist
    March 19, 2008

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    Wow! This is quite sad. Great use of your words though. A lot is spoken in few words. Thanks for entering and good luck!