Not a day goes by,
not a minute lost,
not a wasted thought,
not a single tear,
not a desired longing,
not a misplaced note,
not the joy of song,
not the time to speak,
Just the thought of you,
Not a love so great,
not a canyon so vast,
not a lonely night,
not a will to succeed,
not a love so strong,
not the beating of a heart,
not the wanting to hear yours,
not the essence of you,
Just needing it all...
A contest entry
- Without the words by Envelope.
4200 points, ended April 3, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ahh love, someone really should clip that fairies wings one day. I enjoyed the form, it gave a strange halting sound to your write, and really turned my thoughts away from what was being said, which I think is important when you're writing about love, seeing as an infinite amount of other writers have already said the same thing. Good job at fooling me, definately
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