Tthe night is coming
But i'm standing here
Whatching the bright blue sky turn black
My love is spreading all around
Around the world to every one
Listning to the sweet sounds all around me
Birds singing
The wind swising by
The stars are here now
Sinning in the night sky
My love still spreading
Take my love and keep it inside
Then share it with friends and family
Don't just keep my love
I would love you to share it with every one.
A contest entry
- IMAGE CONTEST by JoyfulWriter.
875 points, ended March 29, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter the very first poem you posted by whispernthedark.
435 points, ended March 26, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aha, you should always spread love around
the more you give
the more comes back to you
great message Kool
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Beautiful
I can completley see why you won the HM trophy for a contest mentioned above. this is absolutely a very beautifully penned poem and I grasped immediately the strong beautiful message you placed into this write. anyw ays its amazing how incredible your poem is here and I really enjoyed it. excellent write sweetie and keep it up
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Heartwarming :)
Sweet poem and as mentioned before, an ideal way of how the world should be.
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This is a great poem - what a lovely image you painted with your words; I love that you want to spread love around, share it.
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Great job! This is a cute poem. You make me feel so loved.
You should do awesomely in the contest!!!
-MeMeMeMeMeMeeeeeee!
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I love the sentiment. That is definitely the way the world should be. We could do a lot better for ourselves if we showed love instead of always trying to be better than everyone else! Good poem!
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Nice message in your poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Very inspiring and full of beauty and wonder...just touched my heart...thanks for entering my contest...good luck...smiles, Terry
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