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To The Desperate

 

 

 

In every bright ray of sunshine, in every dream

 

I hear you,

on the gray fringes

of sorrowed existence,

 

I see you,

frantically reaching

for anything that is true,

 

I feel you,

grasping for my love

that shines so very bright~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Riftkin gold member
    March 20
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    such sweet words that bring beauty to the pages of AP thank you. Riftkin


  • MariGoes gold member
    March 19

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    I enjoy reading short poems, but this one doesn't feel as a short one, it has everything that makes a long poem work, specially abundance in feelings.
    Lovely!

    Mari


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    March 19

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    Oh wow.. This was short but it had such power.. I really enjoyed reading this..Good luck..
    Peace to you, Jetleena

  • pearl-dragon
    March 18

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    To have that faith in each others love that you know it will be burning brightly forever. Such beauty in your words. Best wishes in the contest.

    Margaret



  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 18

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    this is so gorgeous. Every time I read a poem by you - your writing has improved, by a lot!!
    I love the italic beginning and how the rest of the poem flows so well from that...very creative and beautiful..


  • michichoeret
    March 18
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    wonderful

    pure beauty so magically captured


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    March 18

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    You have captured this brilliantly. Definately 10 lines of beauty. Well done again. J


  • BellaD
    March 18
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    Beautiful...

    as always! I just love "on the gray fringes of sorrowed existence" Exquisite.


  • CinfullyDelicious gold member
    March 18

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    Oh my dad

    Speechless, this is amazingly beautiful

    Worthy of gold

    Cin


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 18

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    You always pen words of such beauty.. and this is no exception. 10 lines of such care and beauty.. well done!


  • Margaret Denham
    March 18

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    In every bright ray of sunshine, in every dream...

    Words that will forever echo long after you're gone. You have truly written ten lines of beautiful thoughts. My best wishes to you in the contest.






  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    March 18

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    Such beauty within sincerity. A pleasure to read. Best wishes to you in this contest... x Many blessings, Lavender Butterfly.

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