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Dreamers

The closer I get to my dream
The more people push me away
Almost there striving to win
Then A gust of wind and everything gone
How can it be so hard to live life
Why is it every time I am almost there
Everything creates an opposite force to push me away

Away from my dream away from reality

I'm stuck in a world full of my own toughts

Trapped in my own reality

Immagination taking its toll

All I want to be is free

Free from my mind

Free from every opposite force

Free to get my dream 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 18, 2008
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    It does sometime feel like we take one step foward and two back due to forces outside our control! All we can do is continue to push through it, keep our hope alive!

    This is a great piece sweetheart.. full of questioning and despair...