Unwinding dreams,
Play a trick in all our whims.
I wonder from where?
I spray the little imagination I have,
into the air to form a wave.
I closed my eyes.
Envision for the future,
was the pound of the hoof.
For I fear the world so trapped,
I speed away as a wisp of air so white!
Author notes
Pis inspired: Expressing the unexpressed. The unexpressed can be a vague emotion which could make you erase a memory which makes you speed away as a wisp of air unknown to anyone. Unexpressed could be the love or care which bubbles up within you pleading to be let out.!
A contest entry
- - Monday Night Quickie - by Desire.
700 points, ended March 21, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I found myself almost closing my eyes when I read this...I loved this piece a lot. Thanks for your entry
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: To express the unexpressed
Love the images You have brought forth and the feeling of freedom especially from the restraints of everyday which can suppress the Spirit at times but after reading this...it washes the residual away...
These lines grabbed at Spirit~
Envision for the future,
was the pound of the hoof.
For I fear the world so trapped,
I speed away as a wisp of air so white!
Wonderful piece You have created~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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