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Gazing Love

You hold my hand
I hold yours.
A path lights up the hazy end
As we smile on our way.

Every silent step
All these messy turns
The stillness drives me insane
As I try to cry it away

Yet, there is a warmth in my chilling heart
As you grace my days light-heartily.
Toward the sun from the moon
I walk with you forward.

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    March 18, 2008

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    ahh not exactly what i was looking for. Heartfelt and optimistic, but nothing too surprising here, I feel like I could click on any random poem and find the same lines and phrases.