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In Her Arm's He Cries

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He cries yet in her arm's
As he tells her of his pain
That has held so deep with in
Way down deep inside his
Mind as well as soul

Still searching for
His little one's
That he helped to bare
Some one out there
Has to know where
He can find his children
Some where , some way , some how

If you are a parent
I know you can relate
To all of this pain
Trapped inside his soul
Wondering where next to go

Haunted and tantalized
In his nightmare's
Every night another dream
Another heart ache
As well as sigh
And tear still yelling
Out in pain

So my friend
Before you condeam
Look up into the star's
So bright looking back at you
Bright as they may be
They see all that there is to see

From the purest,tiny being
To the worst as one would say
As he lays in her arm's
He cries,She cries all the same
Yet the world does not see
The man crieing to be
As strong as he above
The something that none of us
Can or could ever be

Written By: Brenda Gae Harper

March 17,2008

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I really like the topic that you chose for this Contest. I am sure that it should bring many writer's out of the wood work, and back into their poetry.

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    April 9, 2008

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    Well this is so sad cause I know this is a true story! I am sorry for your pain! I hope it all works out in the end for you! In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    March 18, 2008
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    Oh don't worry about it.
    Great write, thanks for all your efforts.


  • LoveSpell-PurpleRose silver member
    March 18, 2008
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    To The Judge Of This Contest !

    If you look at my poem and count my line's you will find that there are only 39 of them in my Poem. I do not know what went wrong !