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The Air was perfumed with the wonderful rhapsody  my lover was playing

such a sensual melody left me silent

as her fingers danced so gracefuly too and fro about their ivory hall

Even now i can't recall what it was she was saying

 

It didnt matter so long as she kept playing

as long as she left me hypnotized

Her plaything, blissfully trapped

wraped in words i never heard

 

On she played

on i loved

on i listened

on and on and on

an eternity of harmony

 

 

 

 

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  • grapefruite
    March 18, 2008
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    i think i like the imagery in this one best. very nice


  • Perception
    March 18, 2008

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    Very interesting... I love the images and the sounds you portrayed in your writing. I really liked the words you used in this one...

    I like pianossss!!!

    Thanks for entering and Good luck