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Uneasiness and forced patience

I sit.
I wait.
I gasp for air.

This time...
Please don't let the phone ring.
I want to sit in silence.

It keeps me sane.

They mined for my ruby soul,
In hopes for precious gems.
I hope they find them.
I don't want a clouded stone existence...

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It's a long story.
I just want to be okay.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 16

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    a very somber feeling to this, so i will just say that it expresses some deeper feelings in a very strong way, the treader gets a sense of something important...PK


  • Starcrossed Dreamer
    March 18, 2008

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    My favorite so far. I like the imagery. I like. I like a lots.