Social tear drops
as a rivulet of pain
flowing with wavy silence
and
jealousy with hatred
in cuddling embrace
float on the raft of ecstasy.
Oozing blood of humanity
punctured by arrows of apathy
gets dry
whilst
freedom bleeds to death
on the lap of weepy Nature
and carcass body remains.
Flinty vultures dance
with wings of laughter
as Satanic forces sing songs
when
volcano erupts
as punishment by God
and the Earth vanishes.
Author notes
dark and meaningful with a moral or lesson behind it, abstract
A contest entry
- TASTE THE DARKNESS BIG POINTS WHAAAT by bones7.
2300 points, ended March 21, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I loved it.
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i wish this had been longer, and that you have incorporated a twist in here, as the contest requested...all in all, very descriptive, and i wish you the best of luck in this contest
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great.
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