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The Cleansing

Starlight dances among the obsidian expanse
Illuminating each illusive shadow
Casting out Hades’ demons
Inhuman wails of agony sound
As Tainted flesh burns away
Purifying all that is touched
By radiant innocence

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  • Metaphorist
    March 19, 2008

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    Great imagery and use of diction. I also loved the alliteration in line two. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Angelflower
    March 18, 2008
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    Good.

    Iliked it.. The image you brought to mind with your words was great!
    Peace to you, Jetleena.