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Steady Upon the Torn Cliff

Steady upon the torn cliff
Abandoning the sand
Arise from self-arrival
And feel close to your opposite hand.

Untying melancholy
And squeezing it in palm
A life line cares to follow through
A charm in selfless long.

Plead to trying, caging resist
Aware and fire, crumbled
Pinned inside strength's immortal heart
Amazed of canes, tumbled.

Author notes

Random 3-minute poem. ;D I need to excel my writing, so I'm caught writing things like this at midnight when I can't fall asleep. xD

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