I sit, alone,
craving, wanting to feel your touch,
the warmth of your hand around me.
I sit, alone,
remembering all the little things you do,
all of the conversations that we shared.
I sit, alone,
wondering if you feel the same way,
when you look at me what do you see?
I sit, alone,
delving into my memories of you,
of your perfect eyes that have so much depth.
I sit, alone,
hoping of a future,
a future that I replay in my mind, over and over.
I sit, alone,
trying to find the signs of how you feel,
in this one way love.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Heart by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - confetti and kisses by honey bear.
2200 points, ended May 12, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this very lovely but rather sad write, very full of emotion and longing
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I like the emotion of the poem. Has this been a personal experience for you? It is sad when you love someone who doesn't share the same feelings. Very well written.
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Nice flow. Best of luck.
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I like the way this flows and plays out. Very nice indeed. Best of luck.
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