So I finally learned how bad it hurts
To have to let someone go
I took the time I had with you for granted
I never thought you’d go
I see now that it matters not how many tears each night I cry
No matter how much my heart hurts inside
I still have to face reality and that’s saying goodbye.
Im crying now as I write this sweetie
Its breaking my heart to know you wont be there
Why cant you stay we can make it better
Like we use to do, remember doll face
When it was just me and you against the school
Please don’t give me my heart back
I want you to keep it forever I know we cant be together
But I love you its true and that’s a strong word
But I have no problem saying it to!
I never knew how bad it would kill me
To have to let you go!
I will forever miss you I love you that I hope you know.
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aww...this is so sad--great job on the emotion
♥ meg
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omg this is so terribly sad!
oh =[
Don't you make me cry now! >.<
-tears-
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oh noes! >.<
~Rain
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letting go of someone you love is always a b*itch, and hurts like hell..
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It's a hard thing to do, and it's a hard thing to say, but this is just another lesson we face. Life is full of goodbyes, hellos, and ends as well as new begennings. Today this is a tragedy, tomorrow you'll think a huge mistake, but in a year or two, maybe an entire lifetime, you'll look back and remember you two, and the times that you spent, how it changed your life forever,then you'll look at your lover, and thank god that you've found them.
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"I still have to face reality and that’s saying goodbye."
AMEN. It's probably the hardest thing I've ever done, let my last boyfriend go. We were going to marry, everything was going to be fine. And you know, I literally felt broken. Everyone always says that and I've always seen it as cliché, but my God I felt so broken and so empty that it made me sick. I'm holding on to the hope that all will be ok, given the time. I hope this happens for you, too. Love can kill and save us, that I know is true.
Much love dear.
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A very sad trial that we all have undergone, the pain never goes away and small things will bring it back. But eventually it will ease and allow the world to bring you some where you need to be.
Very well written, full of deep feeling,
Mouser
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Very good write! Wow!! That's so sad and just wow!
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good poem
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Excellent,
This piece really pulls on the heartstrings of the reader.. having been heart-broken in my time, and suffered many lost loves.. or so I thought.. I know this pain.. Time to move on, and make new memories.. which I'm sure you're trying to do. I love ya, and you're such an inspiration on showing true love.
Dad.
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this is really good
you did a nice job on this i really like this keep up that great work
~brookeann~
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