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My Piano

Softly, Graceful
Does my right hand play up high in heaven

Strong, Harsh
Does my left hand play in hell

Doesn't matter which flat, natural or sharp, I play
The music will send me to heaven or hell
But that doesn't matter...

I just want my piano...

A contest entry

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  • cover fire hero
    April 12, 2008

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    Pretty good man, seems to be about our duality, kind of indifferent. We just want to live our lives. That's my take anyway. Thanks for entering.


  • ClandestineDreams
    March 28, 2008
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    great!!!! i really liked it!!


  • Perception
    March 18, 2008

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    Hmmm... Very interesting take... I like it

    I like pianos too! Hehehe...

    Thanks for entering
    and
    Good luck in the contest