The piano sings a soothing melody
as my fingers quickly glide across the keys.
Each one, black and white, has its own personality...
the whites are the significant batter,
and the blacks are the icing on the cake.
The piano is a talented instrument,
as it can speak
HIGH...
or low...
yet consistently manage a soft, flowing tune.
A contest entry
- Play Me like a Piano... by Perception.
300 points, ended March 20, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Writes That Deserve A trophy by piccola.
600 points, ended August 9, 2008, 56 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Very Nice. I really enjoyed this peom. I especially liked the line "The piano is a talented instrument," along with your explanation. I liked how you capitolized HIGH, and seperated low. Nicely done.
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Congrats on your gold. I enjoyed the imagery in this.
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Nice write. Congrats on a well deserved gold trophy!! I too play an instrument and each note sings its own song.
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This is great. I like the way you've seperated the word 'low" so that we think in terms of lowering ... I think as I read aloud my voice even lowered
thank you for the entry
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Great write. I love to play keyboard! I've read a few of your poems. Mind if I had you to my favorites?
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i like playing the keybord sometimes too this poem is great!!
good luck in the contest -
Good job. The piano is a wonderful instrument.
Lots of luck in the contest.
Brian -
Beautifully written! ;D Much luck in the contest.
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I love this!!! Thanks for enteringggg!!!
I love pianos!
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Good luck in the contest
Hopefully we'll get some more entrants 
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