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Sustenance


Shoulders droop
in sulking self pity.

Lamenting my destiny
over fine coffee
strokes ego's endurance.

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Prompt: (15 words)
I am through with being completely miserable. Just plain miserable will have to be enough.

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  • Iris Doyle
    January 3
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    brilliance. thats all i have to say


  • breedluv gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    Congrats on the silver! Have had deep thoughts over fine coffee many times.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 17, 2008
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    Oh I do like this. Nicely done. ~Pamela