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You Inspire Me

Your eyes inspire me
They make me really think
They stop me from doing wrong
To think before I speak

Your hands inspire me
They way they catch me when I fall
They calm me down when i'm upset
And help me through it all

Your lips inspire me
They way they're warm and bold
They make me live in this moment
And not be unhappy and cold

Your embrace inspires me
They way it's thoughtful and sweet
It makes me want to stay right here
And never move my feet


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  • okadadokie
    April 24, 2008
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    Lovely write. Beautiful words and thoughts. Sorry for the delay.

    ~Oka/KC


  • individuality gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    a good poem, aye, love is a great inspiration in life, to have it lift our hearts and minds to brand new heights.


  • honorable mention
    March 18, 2008
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    very nice. i liked it very much. thanks for entering and good luck.

  • DarkRomantic113
    March 17, 2008
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    A very nice play on words.


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    March 17, 2008

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    aw!
    i think this was a very moveing and loveing poem
    i wish you only the best in the contest take care


    endless

  • diabeticboy
    March 17, 2008

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    i wish i could inspire you!!! if i could youd never be short of inspiration cuz id never let go of you

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