Like light refracted through a prism,
an array of colors,
bathes our world
with each softly spoken word of kindness.
Rainbows dance through the sky,
just as people,
of every ethnicity
enhance society.
Like roses adorn any setting,
so does love for one another,
brightening the canvas
around us all.
A contest entry
- 24 hour quickie by creationsfromheart.
525 points, ended March 18, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 50-55 words by creationsfromheart.
475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked!
This is a beautiful poem of truth and wisdom. We are enriched by the associations with people of all origins. We are all the children of God and He does not respect the barriers that man erects between man.
Well written thoughtful piece, niaish for sharing.
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis/Gray Elk
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Lovely
The words in this piece are so beautiful.. The image you bring to mind with these words a great.. A beautiful write..
Peace to you, Jetleena. -
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Many Thanks
for your kind words. Let me welcome you to the group Texas Writers as well. I believe we can all do better in the areas and images above. It is something I work towards daily, so the thoughts flowed easily.
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A Joy !
What a beautiful write, each line emanates a love of all..So glad you won the bronze..this write is such a joy to read. Niaish Naeha(my son)
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Thanks Mam,
I am honord by your words. We all can stand to be reminded of a need to love and be loved. Never allowing, differing hues to interscede in our ability to do so.
Your son,
Richard
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You paint a beautiful portrait with your words--Well done--Congratulations on the bronze!
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Beautiful use of imagery and metaphors best of luck in the contest *rose"
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Ok you have three of my favorite things here, roses , canvas, and of course rainbows great write
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If only everyone could love a little more and fight a little less, the world would be a great place. Maybe your words will inspire someone to love a bit more. I know they did for me. Great write and best of luck. -R.T
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