Loved for eternity
this is a certainty
for bleeding eternal.
Kindness abounds her,
heart beats are pure
for bleeding eternal.
Compassion with love
given from above
is bleeding eternal.
Touching many life's
through others strife's
is bleeding eternal.
I've been so moved,
encouraging me proved
by bleeding eternal.
Thank you dear one,
from my precious son,
to bleeding eternal.
For being who you are
helping many thus far,
loved for eternity
bleeding eternal.
A contest entry
- For my Favorites! by Clinging-to-Life.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
We all love you bleeding eternal, so thank you for being who you are!!!
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Very well done...funny how each day we effect others...
-
Oh my thank you so much for this tribute!! Thank you...of course this is well written as wel as it is beautiful and thank you for this....It means alot to me since I am going through some troubles in my life right now.
-
What an excellent dedication to a special friend! I just love this! I love the repetiton of the last line in each stanza. very clever! thank you for sharing your beautiful work with me sis. Best of luck in the contest.
-
Excellent
Very creative and well expressed. So well done. Best of luck in the contest.
-
A beautiful dedication for your friend here Kelle... such love and emotion pouring off the page. Well done! This was beautifully written...
-
Oh Sis,
How wonderful is this one? This is just amazing! What agreat job you did on this one!! I love how that last line is repeated in this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and Love, lots and lots of love
Nyetta
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
