All alone
Star outshone
You picked her over me
Why did I not see
Lying
Crying
Wishing life were fair
Hoping I can dare
I may run
Life's no fun
I can't deal
This is surreal
I thought we'd last
I guess that passed
Sinking
Drinking
Lights turned out yet again
Neighbors whisper of your sin
Star outshone
All alone
A contest entry
- A little lonely rainbow by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended March 19, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Screw the Invite Contests (Anything) by ShadedRequiem.
300 points, ended April 15, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope you enjoyed my insanity :)
Comments
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Nothing ever lasts forever, especially things made of multiple parts that are tried to be fit together by "force" (as some things are just not meant to be).
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True that, indeed. Nothing lasts forever, except now.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
-K
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This is so sad. I love how much emotion you put into this. This is a very beautiful poem. Great write. Alyssa
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its short but so effective and simple because it speaks the depth of true emotions that many feel well done
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Thank you so much!
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