On the edge falling over.
The simple cry doesn't work.
It's all over, yet it goes on.
This empty mind of mine bleeds
for you.
On the edge falling over.
This isn't how it use to be.
The blade was so easy.
The heart broken me.
The lies told so easily.
I can't get out alive.
There’s no turning back.
I can't stay, and I won't.
Leaning over the edge.
The cuts count for the nothing I
am.
Jumping off, you won't catch me.
The tears don't come, I’m won't run.
I'm not meant to get out.
So I’ll stay and bleed what little I have left.
Screaming one last time, I can't make it.
The ending fall, with the last bit of life in me.
Jumping off the edge, and bleeding no more
A contest entry
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Comments
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i love this!
thnx 4 entering -
Nice Sarah. I like it.
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*claps*
i like how you did this one how u put blood an falling in the same poem if u get what i mean
great write


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i like it to, very intense and dark. =)
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This is pretty good. I like it!
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