Enclosed in his beauty we found each other’s lips,
lost in our world of eternal bliss.
Fantasy hung around us,
in beautiful light.
Forever and always,
our beauty ignites.
A contest entry
- What Inspires You? by honorable mention.
726 points, ended April 4, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite only by kitty23.
470 points, ended June 6, 2008, 68 entries
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Comments
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Great Write
wow you must really love this person here
dont let them slip away
i loved theses lines
"Forever and always,
our beauty ignites."
Great job
thank you for entering my contest and sharing your beautiful poem with me and my co judges
keep up the great work
Kitty23
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Wow!! Loved the words in this one. You must love this person alot
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