eyes have seen the comings and goings
openings in the minds of man
Swaddled sweetness slumbers
as mothers love glows serene
Standing in view of the toothy maw,
leading into the unknown darkness,
alone,
the heart sunders slowly
milky orbs fathom
concepts which elude
Friends are like...
the air filling our lungs
Ivy clung tightly
growing upward together
Endless waves roll
gently flowing
and led me to you
Author notes
1st 2 lines from last 8 poems and last line from 9th
starting with "co-exist" and ending with "a malfunctioning guide"
A contest entry
- Insane Tributes to Favorite Teachers... Build a tribute poem by stealing lines from your own poetry... by Melodies.
600 points, ended March 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL
I cannot believe the combo of previous poems painted such a melodic journey of soul...
wow...Mr. Incredibile...this is stunning...
love you to the moon and back!
Tammy
xoxoxo
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superb job my dear bro you have captured laughter and charm at its finest with the uniqueness of your write. well done and many loving blessings always xxx
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Do you realize... really...
When I first joined this site over two years ago, I read poems like this and wondered what in the world they meant but I was sure they must be brilliant and I just didn't understand them... but someday I would.
Well, guess what... Your poem is brilliant and I understand it. 
lol I am insane.
But your poem totally rocks. 
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wow
loved the ending
great poem i hope all is well with you
and i wish you all the best in the contest
endless
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