Plenitude poured forth
to remove rough waters
as love's foam gathers
to animate beauty
giving birth to light
Seas of surrender
splash against jagged rocks
to awaken life
within throes of passion
allowed by genesis
which repeats in moments
though they be subtle
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired-Beautiful by sweetgirlwa.
1500 points, ended March 20, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I loved the imagry here, you did an amazing job and did so much justice to my prompt. Thank you so much for your entry.
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wonderful take on the prompt.....good luck in the contest
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ok, didn't look at the pic (took WAY TOO LONG to open the damn thing!) but I can tell you that your words have painted a picture of beauty for me
word usage was amazing (as per usual) and ...yep ... have to call it subtle ... nicely done my friend!
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Oh!!!! How lovely!!! Your words were just magic and flowed so nicely off the tongue!!! Pure magic!!! Thank you for the chance to read this.....Very well done and best of luck!!
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