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Beneath the Seas

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Beneath the seas

of waving kelp and seeping brine

there swims the sprite of ocean sighs

beauty's goddess of lore and legend

holding Elysium's breath in her womb,

giving birth upon the breeze

aided by Neptune's bath of marine magic

to what in mortals gives their hearts

the pulse of passion's pearls.

 

In cresting call her sulky swirling spell

bespeaks its siren song

that reaches forth in undulating throb

deep into the veins of desire.

 

They come in boat of sail and steam

in search upon the glassy aqua sheen

for a drink from the divine nectar she pours

over the souls once wading in despair's cesspool,

which never sip from love's pure wine

flowing from her naked charmed essence.

 

Beings as vessels passing in the night

upon a concrete surface

comes her resonance of amore's taunting tones

sending it vibrations into the quivering subdued moans,

until her life preserver of romance

at last rescues lives from the desert isles of longing

and there arises in the vision of her elegance spirit

sailing in search of harbors  

with arms to heal their damage cargo.

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  • Desire gold member
    March 21, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Wonderful weaving of words and I did not know You had entered the contest~
    Love the tale told

    They come in boat of sail and steam
    in search upon the glassy aqua sheen
    for a drink from the divine nectar she pours
    over the souls once wading in despair's cesspool,

    Keep that quill dancing~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


  • StarEyes
    March 17, 2008

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    This is amazing!! I don't think I have read anything like this before! What a great job you did on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!!


  • jcat gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    This is by far one of the most gorgeous pieces on this website!!! You have completely outdone yourself here my friend!!! WOW!!!! I am completey captivated here and can not stop rereading every bit. I truly mean that, very well done and best of luck!!!


  • daviscth silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    The imagery in this wonderful piece is amazing!!! No matter what you write it turns out great. LOL. Good luck in the contest.