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Giving in (testing out a tittle)

what makes the future so much more?
when bodies can be remade.
an exotic mind must lay somewhere
inside that metaled skull of yours.
why be soft and gentle
when being harsh hurts so much less.
stop talking
so calmly to me.
I can only beg in so many ways.

hurt me I want it.
bruise me I need it.
show me I swear
I'll behave;
or not

If I must look up
to see you anyway
then why must I always feel
that I am looking down?
use that height;
and


make me

just think how much
better you'll feel afterward
when you won't have to
bow so far down.
come on.

you know you don't have the
ability to stay so
obsequious forever.
eventually you'll want
more.

I starve all day
because of you.
I need this you know
like a fish needs water.
you're killing me
slowly; tortuously.

just
start
acting
the
part
you
strive
to
resemble


please

wrarw!™

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