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Pale and Red

As the warm blood touches my lips
I shiver.
It was long since I tased
This red liquor.

 

I wait by my victim,

So cold.

He turns into another,

As his hand I hold.

 

He shall now belong to me,

No other.

As mine I made him,

Yet another.

 

With me He wil stay,

Forever.

As mine literally,

Leave me, He shall never.

 

Now together forever.

We are happy,

As our pale faces touch

We are one.

Author notes

To stay with me i wish only for him

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  • Devilish Temptation
    August 3, 2008
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    I do like this very much I enjoy talented poems and yours speaks volumes LOVE this!


  • Lonely Christina
    May 14, 2008
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    hmmmm i wouldnt really consider this erotica lol but i like it


  • lifelessx
    May 4, 2008
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    that is a awsome write


  • Afe-la
    April 8, 2008
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    fantastic. not all can make their own way in life...


  • Til the Day I Die
    March 17, 2008

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    O.o kitty this is amazing.. I can see this so clearly in my mind and you have such great dicription on this and you seem to be a genu


  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    March 17, 2008

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    Hmm. this is really sute and gothic too i liked it its good hey i gots a gothic love poem its called Gothic Romance just saying it cause i might help ya make some ideas up. But good write Lassie.

    Sincerely,
    Lonelywolf Tasagka

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