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To a friend

A friend of mine is feeling very sad
Her life is not the way that it should be
A soul it seems that's lost in misery
Just the sort of thing to drive you mad

And still her writing teems with energy
Her talent lifts her friends in every way
She graces us with magic poetry
And makes me glad that I her saw today

So lady please remember I am here
I'll be around you know I'm here to stay
Never have been known to duck or sway
Just I hope a little source of cheer

It doesn't really matter what you feel
You have so many friendships that are real



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  • moonbumps silver member
    March 18, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL...
    Hilly
    xx


  • Gwenevere
    March 18, 2008
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    I am sorry for your friands unhappiness but with good friends like yourself around she will rise the storm.Freindship tp me is as important as love because the two are joined together.Freindship without love is a very shallow affair.So continue givinfg her your love as I know you will.A lovely poem of support, Ros


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 18, 2008
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    It looks like you hit the mark with this one, Jeff, and she loved it.


  • Corvus Corone
    March 17, 2008
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    Thank you babes and yes you do make me smile even when tears are all that my eyes see


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Indeed I agree with Sue, I am sure she will love it. Its what you do and who you are...She needs love and you spooned it to her..Great job and a precious piece.

    Love
    PAssions


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    I know she'll appreciate this very much...

    Love Sue


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    This is something very special. A friend like you is hard to find in these days, so please know that you are someone pretty special.

    Hugs
    Chryssa


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    I am sure this friend will be really happy with this poem and that it will be a delightful read for her to see. The poem shows a good intent of staying close to your friend with a true friendship forever well delivered (Brian)

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