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Not you, HERRR*

Listen
Its not your fault

You know what she did to me
My so-called friend
Now I am like the one I despise
Why must I be this way?

I am sorry for the words that have been spoken.
I am sorry for the anger emerged.
I am sorry for the angel turned Satin.
I am sorry for the friendship submerged.

I don't do it on purpose.
It happens anyway.
I hate to do anything like this.
It comes out how SHE would say.

I must say I am sorry.
I must because it is not your fault.
I must because SHE is a life poisoner.
I must because shoudn't be kept in a vault.

Please
Forgive this sin of mine.

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I hate being mean to my friends when I don't mean it ...

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  • Til the Day I Die
    March 17, 2008

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    hehe all is forgiven. -hugs- we all have our emo moments and you just happened to snap at me but we're cool. i love the poem it's got great flow and great emotio


  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    March 17, 2008

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    This is good again i dont like to be mean to my friends either when i dont mean it either i hate it it makes me feel like so much like shit it also kinda relates to my Poem Listen smae morals kinda similar ironies but different But it was still a good write lassie .

    Sincerely,
    Lonelywolf Tasagka


  • rainbow bi trinity
    March 17, 2008

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    feel thiz i get mean with otha's when they mess with my friends i rarely get mean less i have to nice though