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colors

I see color
always around me
emanating from everything
color in a million shades glowing
do you ever see the color?
the shining light?
I see color

She's golden
a million miles
and I still see her shine
above all others she shines bright
and in her warmth I grow
feeling needed
She's golden

I see colors
each one different
original is depth and shape
three dimensional colors rotating
moving through many degrees
changing, shifting
I see colors

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  • PerfectImperfection
    March 18, 2008
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    I see you were striving (it seems) for the rictameter form. Though, it does not fit the typical syllable count for the form - it is still a nice piece.
    The colors of our soul; peeling, shedding sometimes in layer - revealing depth. Thank you so much for your entry!


  • StarEyes
    March 17, 2008

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    What a great job on this one!! I love this one! I love the form, the lay out, just everything about it!! What a great job!!

    Best of luck in this contest!



    Nevermore~

    Me


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    wow i love the way you have written this and the use of metaphors and color its amzing well done with this bro