I keep wondering,
why the world is so unfair,
why the world makes you choose,
the wrong decisions!
All the love I give you,
you don't return,
even half of it.
But the flow is still there,
from me to you..
You see in her,
what I see in you.
But she don't appreciate
what you give..
Yet I appreciate
what you don't even give me!
I see you with her,
but it don't seem as though,
it's working.
But I see you that,
you want to make it work,
I can see the eagerness in your eyes.
When I break down..
for I see you with her,
all the time,
My friends come around,
to figure out what's wrong,
and when I let them know,
I can quite figure out..
they think I am a fool!
Yes sweetheart I am a fool,
for loving you this long,
and not to let you know
my desires,
I guess I am a fool..
but I am proud of it,
for I am crazy about you!
Even with all this pain,
I would rather see you happy,
so if it means you smile with her..
well I would like to see you,
happy with someone else,
than to be unhappy with me!!
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Heart by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended March 20, 2008, 19 entries
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Nice attempt at poetry. Work on the flow of your poem and make it less repetitive.
I've been there with caring for someone who was involved with someone else. Don't be so focused on that one person that you don't notice someone else who is just as focused on you.
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Thank you I hope to really improve on my poems..I keep trying and thank you for the good advise too
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Thats so sweet and that is real unconditional love. Best of luck to you.
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Thank you..hope that they realise it as you do
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