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Consume

I stare through
wide round eyes

Not believing
the person I am seeing

I feel my heart beat
faster, faster

Rage boiling from
the pit of my stomach

Blinding me
Fury coursing through my veins

Anger making stains
on my heart

Consumed
In this emotion

Lashing out -
doing something
I never would've

Anger
Rage
Fear
Consumes me

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option 5

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  • liduen silver member
    March 17, 2008
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    Great job! You described the emotion very well. Nice write and good luck in the contest