I know you have messed up in the past
But the fights they never seam to last
This time though it’s going to be hard to just let it go
You were with her
Even if for less then an hour
You were still with her
That hour now has all the power
The power to break my heart
To rip it right out of my chest
To throw it to the ground like a ton of bricks
Put it though a shredder
Like it really didn’t matter
You always tell me
Baby don’t worry things will get better
But I'm scared now
Afraid of what our future may hold
For over two years now we have been so close
We have been both lovers and the best of friends
Will that all be coming to an end
Because for that hour you slipped between my fingers
For that hour she had all the power
The power to make me cry
Till the rivers run dry
To tear my hearts in two
There was almost no more me and you
This may sound stupid
You may call me crazy
But I will still love this man
I will still call him my baby
Cause sometimes you just have to live for tomorrow
I saw his regret and I saw his sorrow
In every tear that he cried
Every sweet, salty tear I dried
From his big beautiful chocolate brown eyes
In all his remorse his voice grew hoarse
He turned and looked deep in my eyes
Baby I’m so sorry please don’t leave me
At this very moment I realize
He is my life my love my world
I would do anything to stay by his side
Also at this moment looking into those sensitive eyes
His arms wrapped snug around me
I see the fear he holds deep inside
I see the pain and hatred in his eyes
Not hatred for her or me
But hatred of self for putting me through this
You may call me a fool
You may say he broke all the rules
But I still love this man
I will still hold his hand
She may have had him for that hour
She may have got everything
That was supposed to be just for me
But who will have him forever
Who is his shoulder to lean on
His lover and his best friend
I will hold him when I please
And no bitch I don’t have to get on my knees
just to please
Author notes
committed love
A contest entry
- Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Painful Side Of Love by Blooming Poet.
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300 points, ended March 29, 2008, 43 entries
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It is true, that hour could take the power, but you have to make it diminish... thank you for sharing your favorite poem with me. Best of luck in the contest.
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whisper
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Personally I think that this works for my Painful side of love contest, the pain and hurt is definitlyy there, but I don't think this is committed love, its more puppy love then anything, on offence or anything.
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This feeled with so much pain that comes with betrayal. I hope you realize that she has no power to hurt you. He was the one that has the power to hurt you with his moment of weakness. I hope for you and him to find forgiveness-you for him and him for hisself. To get past this is in both of your hands. Good-luck!
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thank you very much yes this was a while back and we have forgave and our relationship is actualy stronger and better than ever!!
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Excellent Write !
You did a wonderful job on this special peice of poetic work . Keep it up, and let all your emotion's out more often. Brenda Gae
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