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Welcome to my version of hell,
A place where dreams quiver
A home where hope shivers.

Welcome to my hell,
The place where I reside.
Welcome to the Underworld,
The place I lose my pride.

And welcome to my sorrow!
Your welcomed to it all,
Watch me now as I begin to fall.
Knowing now that I truly lost it all...

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Written December 3rd, 2003

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  • countrygrlcansurvive
    December 15, 2003
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    This is an excellent poem!! I just looked on my "who has you on your favorites" list and I just wanted to let you know that this is "sweetlydisturbed" I just changed my name. thanks for reading and appreciating my stuff!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 3, 2003
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    I'm sorry to read your doing so bad, I can only hope you get better a bit, you seem like such a sweetheart, and don't deserve feeling this way, so I send some (hugs) your way, in hopes you feel better soon my friend! And thanks for sharing you, and the visits with me as well, I appreciate you! ~Smiles~

    -Timothy